rain is nature's way to say,
"hey mortals,i wipe your sin with my tear; give you joy without any fear
polluted, may i be,like your minds,as i see
pain to me,
pleasure to you
mother shall sacrifice for kids like you
you may enjoy what you get
never forget,you'll regret."
enjoy rain with bliss,
it is nature's way to kiss...
posted by Swetha at 10:20 PM
4 Comments:
"pain to me, pleasure to you"
Nice set of lines.
Nice finish as well.
To sum it up, an impressive beginning.
thanks da...ur opininon means more 2 me...;->
//"it is nature's way to kiss... "
I was wondering where is it heading? - about rains, or about humans, but then the last line was too wonderful to distract me from others!!!
well it could have been just the last line and would have still made a wonderful verse :)
wow!! 1st post and such nice line!!:)
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